Looking really promising man! Though you might want to put that its a trailer, I got the impression it was the full video and when the fighting never turned up I was super bummed out. But I'm looking forward to the full thing!
Didn't find it funny, unfortunately, sorry! But the animation and style were great, absolutely no complaints about that at all, good job there :D
I would spent some time thinking out your writing and work in more depth, the whole thing comes off as immature and thrown together in like, 5 seconds. Maybe that's what you were going for, but it didn't work very well, which sucks, because the quality of the work was very decent!
Hey, it was okay! Though there is a LOT you can improve on. The lip syncing was a little off, the audio needs a little clean up (recommend some of the tutorials on this very site for that) but the big thing for me was the quality of the animation.
The characters never really moved at all except for their arms and mouths. Which is okay sometimes, but their posture and stance were always in the same boring, stood upright position. It says nothing about their character, and it brings the animation down tremendously.
This tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b3iOFYXlRG4
explains what I mean in a lot more detail (highly recommend binging on that whole channel actually).
I could criticise you for a lot of other things (although you had a great use of colour and I liked the pace and flow of your animation!) but its better if you start on one thing and improve that, the rest will come later :) hope this helps!
I thought the animation was fine, but Andrew does have a good point. Not saying dont animate the grumps (I'm doing my own) but it would be a shame if it was all you did, would be a waste of talent for sure! But for now, decent work, I hope to see more from you!
Oh no, This is definitely not all I'm doing, I have actual cartoons planed for the future, I'm just doing these for fun.
Posting an animation test like this won't exactly get you good reviews, and I wouldn't recommend it really, since it's going to be reviewed on the basis on the standard any other animation would be reviewed.
All I would say right now is keep practicing, practice the lip sync and the movement and try to post something you feel proud of, rather than an unfinished demo. Keep going!
ECCCHH ITS SO GOOD
Beautiful work man, you should never apologise for posting from the JonTron era!
Yeah I'm surprised with the amount of feed back I'm getting from youtube and reddit. I might do more in the future
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