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Looking really promising man! Though you might want to put that its a trailer, I got the impression it was the full video and when the fighting never turned up I was super bummed out. But I'm looking forward to the full thing!

Hey, it was okay! Though there is a LOT you can improve on. The lip syncing was a little off, the audio needs a little clean up (recommend some of the tutorials on this very site for that) but the big thing for me was the quality of the animation.

The characters never really moved at all except for their arms and mouths. Which is okay sometimes, but their posture and stance were always in the same boring, stood upright position. It says nothing about their character, and it brings the animation down tremendously.

This tutorial: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b3iOFYXlRG4
explains what I mean in a lot more detail (highly recommend binging on that whole channel actually).

I could criticise you for a lot of other things (although you had a great use of colour and I liked the pace and flow of your animation!) but its better if you start on one thing and improve that, the rest will come later :) hope this helps!

ECCCHH ITS SO GOOD

Beautiful work man, you should never apologise for posting from the JonTron era!

Wakman111 responds:

Yeah I'm surprised with the amount of feed back I'm getting from youtube and reddit. I might do more in the future

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